This is my final double page spread. I am really happy with what I have produced and again I feel that it fits in well with the colours and style of the contents page and front cover.
I think overall the double page spread is good, I think that the layout and images used are attractive and appropriate. However I do think that the masthead could be bigger and bolder. I like the guitar picks that are scattered around randomly too.
I really like your double page spread Katherine, the Poloroid pictures laid out on the page add a nice touch as do the guitar picks.
My favourite bit is definitely the post-it note showing the tour dates, it is something that was well thought out and reminds me of the sort if thing I'd see in a proffesionally developed magazine.
For constructive criticism, maybe a sub-article could have been added in order to use up more room. Also the Mast head looks a bit dull and could be livened up with a more exiting font.
The images are really strong and bold and they stand out even more against the grey background i like how you have used a variety of colours on the DPS overall I really like it.
This is my final double page spread. I am really happy with what I have produced and again I feel that it fits in well with the colours and style of the contents page and front cover.
I think overall the double page spread is good, I think that the layout and images used are attractive and appropriate. However I do think that the masthead could be bigger and bolder. I like the guitar picks that are scattered around randomly too.
ReplyDeleteWhat I like:
ReplyDelete- This has improved alot since the pre-lim task.
- How the photos are put in the photolike images.
What could be improved:
- Less gaps.
- Bigger, more striking masthead.
I really like your double page spread Katherine, the Poloroid pictures laid out on the page add a nice touch as do the guitar picks.
ReplyDeleteMy favourite bit is definitely the post-it note showing the tour dates, it is something that was well thought out and reminds me of the sort if thing I'd see in a proffesionally developed magazine.
For constructive criticism, maybe a sub-article could have been added in order to use up more room. Also the Mast head looks a bit dull and could be livened up with a more exiting font.
The images are really strong and bold and they stand out even more against the grey background i like how you have used a variety of colours on the DPS overall I really like it.
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